Intro Contrast Essay:
I adore golden retrievers. There is just something magnetic about their personalities that makes me want to run to every one that I see; whether it be in a car at the Mall or inside a pet store. I have never been fearful towards the breed and find them to be an overall great dog that is trustworthy around small children. However, I have owned two golden retrievers in my lifetime and can definitely see huge differences between the two dogs that I have raised with my family.
Give us a hint about the three differences between the two dogs before you leave the graf.
ReplyDeleteTry a second intro where you perhaps give us an image of you making a fool of yourself over some strange golden you see.