Mr. Goldfine,

I think I jumped ahead a little.  I was confused about the assignment/due dates.  So, I went ahead and did a 5 graf essay.  Then I rewrote paragraph one about the car in the barn as a 2nd introduction to the essay.  I guess the total 5 graf essay isn't due until next week.  Correct me if I'm wrong....but I think I'm "ahead of the game".

It appears that you wanted this done in segments . Oops.

Thanks,
Lisa