I particularly liked the essay titled "Bread Making". The first paragraph is supposed to "hook" the reader and my mouth was watering and I could actually smell bread baking! I felt as if I was in the writers kitchen with her baking bread. She had a great introduction, lots of supporting details, and had a great summary in final paragraph.
I also enjoyed reading the cause and effect essay entitled "Flooded Basement". The first paragraph hooked
the reader on the tragedy of having severe rains and the result of having water damage to your basement and all of the loopholes that you have to jump through with insurance companies, etc to get the damage fixed and reimbursement for the damages.
These essays gave me a good idea of what is required to write an outstanding essay.
Actually, you rolled on into other types of essays, but I'm glad you found some that interested you.
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